A New version of Orpheus

Orpheus is a very wonderful musician and his love for music was very strong. He liked to play hip hop and his friends would always like his beats but to bad it wasn't on itunes. Orpheus came upon a abandoned old house and he seem to wonder so he played his music and out of that old ugly house came a beautiful girl that was attracted by his music and there it was love at first sight and Orpheus was dieing to know her name and she said Eurydice. They went back to his mansion where all his friends break danced and showed off their skills. She said it was the coolest house she has ever seen and Orpheus's servants got her some new clothes from Hollister and American Eagle. They could not be separated, then one day she went out to bye some groceries and she got kidnapped and never came back. Orpheus went all crazy looking for her and finally they called and said they would kill her if he didn't bring them two million dollars in four days. Orpheus went out all crazy to the bank to check how much money he had and he had one million and five hundred dollars and that is half of what he needed. He told his friends if he could borrow some money but all together they only had fifty thousand dollars. The time was out and he didn't have the money. They called and said if he had the money and he said no and Orpheus said give me two more days and they said ok but after that no more days. Two days pasted and he was one hundred thousand dollars away. They called again to check and he said no all of a sudden he heard a gun shot and Eurydice had died. After that he didi nto want to play any more hip hop and all he did was play these awful beats and the beats didn't make sense. Then one day they all gathered around him and shot him until he was very little pieces.